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Hey!! It seams good!! I would love if you could actualice soon. Kisses.

What the blue balling hell is 'actualice'? If it's some sort of painful medical procedure, count me out.

great start. im definately hooked. can't wait for more! update soon

Hooked on what, phonics? I think not.

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